Really cool song. The sound of it is pretty cool, although the mastering and mixing could've been a little better. You needed some reverb on some of the instruments and some were too loud or too soft. Lastly, my reason for the 8/10 is that all of this sounded like loops that may have been altered in some ways. If you want to get some good feedback and ratings and scores, AND if you're serious about making music, learn how to write original music and use those skills.
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you sound like a pro in your comment ^^ all you say is right
and yes its altered ^^
Awesome song man
Nice beats, nice synths, nice song. Or, really good song. Nice doesn't fit it. Your really good at making music, dude. I hope at some point I'll be able to do this good becuase I got ACID Music Studio for Xmas.
Keep doing an awesome job and happy new years!!!
P.S. Check out my stuff while your at it. Definetly listen to the song !_-Progression-_! It should be rated 5 at the moment!
Loved the part where that lead came in where it starts soft and low in treble and works it's way up.
This song stayed exciting and even though it was a little long, I didn't get tired over it. Just the part with the synth beeping and fading out; I didn't like that much.
Besides that, this song is awesome.
P.S. Read the response I wrote for your review and could you right a review for other? I don't care if you don't but...
P.S.S. (<-piss, LOL) I'm 12 years old.
I am going to in a bit. ha ha, I STARTED making music when I was 12. Now Im 13. cool!
Do you mind checking out my song "Danger Will Come?" Thanks alot.
Great song. The melody was great and the cords went in well with the rest of the song. It was just a little bit too empty to me. Parts I thought needed some cords to go along with it, and there is no really interesting rhythms. It was a little repetitive too.
With a little work, it's possible to fix all of those thing. Happy music making!
P.S. Rate and review some of my stuff at newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1453074
:D finally~ a review! *slaps face, is it true?!?!*
tnx for it :D it was meant to be sad,maybe a lil hallow......i guess i over did the latter D=
tnx for the tips~ i relistened n found the silence indeed was a lil repeating~
tnx again, merry christmas and a happy new year~
*sitting in awe...again...*
I'm back. Great song you made. The trumpet and harp are a very nice combination. The vocals added a nice touch and so did that...ding sound...I think it's a glockenspiel. The song is full of soothing melodies and great harmonies.
I was just sitting listening to it, letting it sink in.
Anyway, great song and keep up the MARVELOUS (cheesy sounding word) work!!!
P.S. I couldn't stay away from NG and I added something new. I made it the day I got it. Christmas!!!
You put something new?! Yay, time to run on over!
No glockenspiel here my good sir, all music box, and some harp, though the more I think on it, the more it DOES sound like glockenspiel... strange, perhaps there's little built in glockenspiels into the music boxes?
In any case, i'm glad you were able to feel it's core, thats all I want from these pieces.
Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it, i'll jump on over to your page right away ^^.
This song is truely a magnificant peace of work. This is really the type of things I want to make, I just don't have the best technology for it.
On my keyboard, you can't step record or do things like on ACID and such.
The strings give the song a base while the oboes and what I think is a panflute give it meaning and hope.
And yes, I'm still working on my ACTUAL final. I'll tell ya when I get it on here
Keep up the good work!
I start off my songs with crappy synths, as that forces me to focus more on the melody over the fact that this instrument sounds really cool etc. Sometimes i'll go on a binge where I just think of the sound, and work off that, though those are not often.
As for your keyboard, yes I realize that would be a problem, if you could get a computer and connect your keyboard to it, and get software like FL, I think you could really do some crazy things.
I look forward to your real final, though it saddens me to think that it may be the last piece you submit. We'll see how that turns out!
Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
I like this song a lot, it sounds pretty good. The vocals give the song a nice touch. I also like the trumpets.
The only thing is some of the quality on the instruments. A couple don't sound that realistic. It's definitly not a major problem though.
You definitly have talent. The thing is is that you could make music for orchestras and you could make some money off of them. Or do you?
That's the problem with Newgrounds. You just start submitting music and then after you got a lot of ideas on here, you figure out you could of made money off of this.
Anyway, good job. It's cool you made #1 on the top 5 for the week!
P.S. can you check out some of my stuff again? One of mine was 4th for a week. Review please if you can. I'll check back again sometime soon!
Thanks DeadEndRoad, there were indeed a few instruments that don't sound that realistic, but then again, when working with a pc as your studio, there are always fall backs.
As for making money off these tracks, nah. I make everything here for everybody to enjoy for free. I have no intentions of selling these stories and ideas, I want them to be heard and nothing more.
Thank you for the congrats, but I fear being #1 only gets you 0 bombs ;), i've gotten 5 thus far in 2 days, lets see how severaly the score will go by the end of the week shall we?
I'll plop onto your page right away! Thank you for the review, again i'm glad you liked it!
The song has a good idea. The piano, even though it could be turned down a tiny bit, is an important part of the melody.
As you said, it doesn't have great quality and the sounds and good enough. It sounds kind of cheap.
Besides that, I sure think it's a good idea for a song, just work on the touch and quality and you might be able to make some hits!
Hey check some of my other stuff and rate it would you? Thanks!
hey thx for the review...i know it is reall cheap and all but i just wanted to get it out here on ng to give and idea of what will soon come...the real version will be very lengthy and elaborate with good sound quality and all...
i think i allready did review your songs....well at least i know i downlaoded some...
k ttyl and thx for the review
-mawkeetus speaking from the xx-chiron-xx account
Holy crap, I just noticed...
You have a clavinova don't you? Is that what you used to make this song becuase it sounds a lot like thats what it was. I have Clavinova and that's what i made most of my songs from songs from, check out my music k?
Great song my friend!!
This song is really good. I couldn't have done better. Awesome piano and great strings. Check out my music and rate it if your still there okay?
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